Describe with Technology : Narrative Writing and Critical Thinking
Essay Revision
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Essay Revision
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Task: Revise your narrative essay.

Goal: Give your readers the best story you can tell.

You may want to review an example of a revised narrative essay before you begin.

See the example:
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Key Concept
Congratulations! You have completed a first draft of your narrative essay. Is your essay as good as it can possibly be? How can you make it better? The best writers are able to put themselves in the minds of their readers.
 
You have researched your topic, but your readers have not. Will they be able to follow your story? Will they be interested in the plot and care about the characters? Will they understand the theme?

Revising is about taking a critical look at your first draft. The purpose of a revision is to make your essay as good as it can be. Learn how to look at your writing from different points of view. Learn what to look for when you revise your essay.

When you draft an essay, you want to be as creative as possible. You want to be inside the minds of your characters. When you revise your essay, you want to be as objective as possible. You want to be inside the minds of your readers. 

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