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Cinderella Story
Peer Feedback Form
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Prepare for your group conference by answering the following questions about your story.
1. What do you want your title to make readers think about?
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2. How did you make your story different from the original?
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3. What parts of your story would you like feedback on?
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After your group conference, write the ideas from other group members that will help you improve your story:
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Peer Feedback Form
Author_____________________ Reviewer___________________
1. After the author has read the title to the story, what does the title make you think of?
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Read through the questions before the author reads the story. Write notes as you listen.
2. Where did the author describe a person, place, or thing in precise, interesting language?
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3. Where did the author use dialog well?
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4. What parts did the author include that were different than the original story because of the different point of view?
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5. What did the author put in the story that surprised you?
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6. What did you like best about the story?
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7. What could the author do to make the story better?
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